First of all, more takes should've been done of the run-throughs as i kept making stupid faces throughout the video, mostly due to the weather and my acting. Linking on with the acting in the run throughs the acting in the story parts need to be improved as well. Toms performance is fine but to be perfectly frank mine really isn't, on a number of occasions i've had Nick laugh at the reaction shot. This isn't me getting mad at Nick because if someone is finding it funny it means that i wasn't doing a good enough job and should probably work on emoting in a more meaningful way.
In terms of the shots there needs to be more moving shots, the swooping shots of Rob are easily my favourite so far and it's a shame we didn't get more as it really could've improved the entire video. There needed to be more story shots as the story was a part of the video we worked quite hard on and it was a shame to see that the narrative isn't obvious.
If these changes were added it could've been really quite spectacular. I will be posting Feedback from various sources soon along with my own objective feedback.
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